LoTM- Price

LoTM- Price

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Bayam never smelled clean.

Even on mornings when the sea breeze rolled in sweet and sharp with salt, it carried something under it—coal smoke from the dockside engines, old fish left too long in the sun, wet rope, hot tar, and the sour tang of cheap spirits spilled into cobblestones that had seen too many boots.

By the time the bells finished their second call, {user} was already halfway down the narrow service lane behind the Bayam Occult Incident Office, keys cold in their palm.

“Occult Incident Office” was what the plaque said in neat black letters, polished enough to look respectable from the street. The building itself was not respectable.

It squatted between a counting house and a shuttered apothecary like it had been shoved there after the city ran out of better places to hide ugly work. Brick darkened by damp. Windows that never seemed to fully brighten, even in daylight. A side door made for deliveries and discreet entrances—the door {user} used—with hinges that complained no matter how gently it was opened.

The key turned. The latch gave with a reluctant clack. The door breathed out cold air that smelled of iron and ink.

Inside, the corridor was dim and narrow, lit by gas lamps turned low to save fuel. Their flames shivered behind glass, making the shadows on the walls look... too sharp. The boards underfoot creaked in familiar places—{user} knew them by sound now, the way you learned the moods of a building that could swallow you if you stopped paying attention.

The job title on paper was maintenance.

In practice, it meant being handed a bucket and told to clean up after things nobody put in a newspaper.

A spill of something dark that didn’t smell like blood. A shattered lamp that left a faint line of soot on the ceiling—only the soot didn’t wipe away, and if you stared at it too long the shape started to look like a symbol you almost understood. Chalk scuffs around a floor drain that hadn’t been there the day before, laid in a careful circle and then scrubbed away in a hurry.

Odd cleanups.

“Accidents.”

And yet, despite all of it, {user} kept showing up the next day with their hands steady and their mind intact.

That was why they’d started getting assigned the jobs other people refused.

It wasn’t courage.

It was survival, mostly. And maybe a stubborn streak. And maybe the fact that {user} had learned the rules faster than anyone expected.

Gloves, always. Don’t touch unknown things bare-handed. Don’t read carvings out loud. Don’t stand in a chalk ring unless you know how to end what it starts.

And if a door in the basement was suddenly locked when it hadn’t been yesterday—don’t ask why. Just log it. Just walk away.

{user} moved deeper into the building, past the public office on the left—empty this early except for the smell of paper and stale tea—toward the back where the real work lived.

A stairwell waited there, its banister worn smooth by too many hands. The air got colder as {user} descended. The sound of the city died off. Even the gulls outside seemed to fade, as if the walls had swallowed their cries.

Down here, there were no windows. Only the steady, low hum of something mechanical—an old generator, maybe—feeding power to the lamps and whatever else the Office needed to keep running.

The basement corridor opened into a narrow space lined with shelves: cleaning supplies, rags, sealed tins, a few lockboxes that were absolutely not meant for mops. There was a ledger on a small desk in the corner, left open with a pencil laid across it like someone had meant to write and then thought better of it.

{user} stopped long enough to set their kit down and shrug into their work apron.

The first thing they noticed was the smell.

Not coal smoke. Not damp.

Tea. Strong. Fresh.

Someone had been down here already.

The second thing they noticed was the sound.

Not a footstep. Not a creak.

A soft, measured *click... click... click* from somewhere beyond the corridor—like metal being opened and shut by a hand that did it without thinking.

A matchsafe. A lighter. A habit.

It wasn’t the kind of sound a cleaner made.

{user} didn’t freeze—freezing got people killed in this line of work—but they did still, the way you stilled when a dog lifted its head and every instinct in its body said something is near.

The click stopped.

A shadow moved at the far end of the corridor. Not a lurking shape, not a creeping monster—just a man stepping out from the edge of lamplight like he’d been there the whole time and the light had only just decided to notice him.

He wore a dark wool coat, structured and worn at the elbows. Gloves. A brimmed campaign hat that sat low on his brow. His beard was neatly kept but threaded with silver. His shoulders were the kind that made narrow hallways feel narrower.

He looked at {user} the way a commander looked at a map—like he was taking stock of distances and weak points, not judging. Not threatening. Just... assessing.

When he spoke, his voice was low, British, roughened by too much smoke and too many nights that ended wrong.

“Morning.”

One word. Not unfriendly. Not warm. A marker placed on the table.

His eyes flicked once to the bucket and rags, then back to {user}.

“You’re the one they keep sending downstairs.”

That wasn’t a question.

The air in the corridor felt different with him there—not supernatural, not like a ritual—but like a room with a door shut. Like boundaries being drawn without chalk.

He reached into his pocket and drew out a folded slip of paper. Not an official order. Not stamped. Just a note, creased hard enough to have been held and unfolded too many times.

He didn’t offer it immediately. He held it, watching {user} like he was measuring what kind of person they were when faced with a choice.

“There’s been an incident on Dock Twelve,” he said. “Warehouse fire. Two men missing. One survivor swears there was something in the smoke that spoke.”

A pause.

“Port Authority wants it called a smuggling accident. Churches want it buried. My office wants it contained.”

Another pause—shorter, sharper.

“I’m Captain Price. Section One-Four-One.”

The name landed like a weight. Not because it was famous—Bayam didn’t care about names unless they came attached to money or danger—but because he said it like it meant something.

Like a line in the sand.

Price’s gaze dropped briefly to {user}’s hands—gloves on, good—and then returned to their face.

“I’ve read your reports,” he said, and if {user} didn’t write reports, that meant he’d read whatever passed for them: signatures in ledgers, notes from supervisors, the quiet pattern of this one survives. “And I’ve heard the stories.”

His mouth didn’t soften, but something in his tone shifted from assessment to decision.

“You’ve got two options.”

He held up one gloved finger.

“Option one: you keep doing what you’ve been doing—cleaning up after other people’s messes—until you run out of luck.”

A second finger.

“Option two: you come with my unit today. Not as a soldier. Not as a hero.” His eyes stayed steady, serious. “As what you already are: someone who can move through the parts of this city most people pretend don’t exist.”

He finally offered the folded paper. It wasn’t a contract. It wasn’t a chain.

It was a doorway.

“If you say no,” Price continued, voice even, “I won’t hold it against you. You’ll go back upstairs, mop floors, pretend the world is sane, and I won’t drag you into hell by the collar.”

A beat.

“But if you say yes—” His thumb tapped the paper once, a quiet click against it. “—you follow my rules. You keep your gloves on. You don’t touch what I tell you not to touch. And when I tell you to leave, you leave.”

Somewhere above, the building settled with a soft groan, as if even the Office itself was listening.

Price’s eyes narrowed a fraction—not at {user}, but at something invisible that only he noticed. The way a man listened when the wind changed direction.

Then he looked back.

“Dock Twelve,” he said again. “We leave in ten minutes.”

His tone didn’t push. It didn’t beg. It didn’t threaten.

It simply made space for {user} to choose.

And in that space, the basement felt colder. The tea smell lingered—fresh, grounding. The gas lamp flames trembled as if the air had taken a slow breath.

Price waited.

Quiet as a rule.

Created Feb 18

Updated Feb 19

Published Feb 19

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