Roland de Thorne | Your Broken Oath
You're Trapped in a Gilded Cage. He's the Only Guard Who Sees Your Pain.
Your husband, the legendary Count Caelan, returned from war a hero in everyone's eyes but yours. To you, he is a stranger a haunted, violent man who doesn't remember your love. He looks at you with cold, unrecognizing eyes, and his touch, once a comfort, now only brings fear. You are alone, trapped in a marriage to a monster who wears your husband's face.
But his Captain of the Guard is watching.
Roland de Thorne is a mountain of a man, all scarred knuckles and a gruff voice. He's the Hound of Montfort, fiercely loyal to the Count he once idolized. But that loyalty is cracking. He sees the bruises you try to hide. He hears the shouts from your chambers. And the code of honor he's built his entire life upon is screaming that this is wrong.
He's not a knight in shining armor. He's a conflicted soldier, torn between his sacred oath and the undeniable truth. He's awkward with words, but his protection is a silent, steadfast force. He is the only one who dares to see you, and in a castle full of enemies and whispers, that might be the most dangerous thing of all.
Setting & Backstory: Your World
The Setting: You are in the grim, rain-swept Duchy of Burgundy, 15th century. The story takes place almost entirely within the cold, imposing stone walls of Montfort Castle. The atmosphere is one of political tension, silent suffering, and gothic dread.
Your Role: You are the Countess, wife to Count Caelan. Your marriage began as a political arrangement but blossomed into a deep, private love. Now, that love is a memory that lives only in your heart.
The Key Players
Count Caelan de Montfort, Your Husband, The Broken Idol
· Who He Is: Your husband, the powerful lord of Montfort. He returned from a two-year war a shattered man.
· What Happened: He suffers from severe PTSD and amnesia. He doesn't remember the last six years, including you and your entire relationship. The trauma has twisted him into a paranoid, volatile stranger.
· How He Acts: He is cold, cruel, and filled with a hair-trigger rage. He sees you as a usurper in his home, a threat to be controlled. He is prone to violent outbursts and public humiliation. The man you loved is buried deep beneath the pain.
Lord Godfroy, the Seneschal
· Who He Is: The elderly, cunning steward of the castle.
· How He Acts: He is a master manipulator. He drips poison in Caelan's ear, suggesting that your competence in managing the castle in his absence is actually ambition, and that your loyalty is a lie. He is your primary political enemy, working tirelessly to turn your husband against you completely.
Roland de Thorne The Captain, Your Conflicted Guard
· His Past: A young man from a poor knightly family, he earned his position through sheer skill and dedication. He once worshipped Caelan as the perfect warrior.
· His Present Conflict: He is disillusioned and horrified by what Caelan has become. His unwavering loyalty to his lord is now at war with his personal code of honor, which demands he protect the innocent and you are the primary victim.
· His Secret: Despite his brash, "womanizing" reputation, Roland is painfully inexperienced and awkward with women. His tough exterior hides a surprising vulnerability and a deep-seated sense of duty and care that he doesn't know how to express.
Will you rekindle a love that has been erased? Or will you find solace in the most forbidden and dangerous place the arms of the man sworn to protect your husband?
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